Trenqil

[trenqil]

Name: (First and Last) trenqil Galamtreim

Cannon Character: Yes/ No : no

Other Characters on the Site: none

Age and Birthday: unsure of eleven age Dec 20 3019

Blood line: pureblood

Sex: female

Year: first

House: any will be fine

Standing: (Either Death eater, Death Eater supporter, Order member, Order supporter or Neutral)

Neutral

Pet: a maris named Halofangs and snowy owl named Aragon

Broom: scarelet falcon

Personality: (At least two paragraphs) Loyal ,just at heart, a risk taker, always willing to help others, brave, cunning, is alot like Haldir the Captain of Galamtreim. Likes prankes. With the remander on the enclosed note.

History: (At least two Paragraphs) Well to say a very long old famliy line of wizards from Lortherin.Always grew up with magicial wizards known as the istari and elven magic. Was rasied with the Weasley's and the Malfoy's.( Godparents)a bit disfunel with Rayin being the normal one. Born to Haldir and Serwanlie(who's in the Grey Haven for she had a fever berfore my dad had got her there.) and has a triwn borther.With the remander on the enclosed note.


Strengths: loyal always keeps my word and will back up an offer.

Weaknesses: (Everybody has a weakness) miss family back home.

Wand: 11" holly/ edony with dragon heart string

Appearance: (Either a description or a picture will do) Looks liks haldir only with reddish blond hair and pointed ears and is the runt of the family.

Post Example: As Trenqil walked into the class and sat down she replied" Morning Professor how are things with you? She then took out her supplies and started taking down notes.


The Application Question: What's your fravrite place in the world?
1. Well I'd have to say with may Father(Haldir) in the Golden wood.
(If you do not know what this is, maybe you should read the rules!)

I agree that I will follow the rules at Beauxbatons Academy. I will not disagree with what one of the staff members has told me to do. I will respect the other members of the site. I will post with detail and over 500 characters. I will not Godmode. If I do any of these things, I will accept what the staff decides.

By writing your Characters name here, you agree to all of the above.
I, Name Here agree to all these terms, and will follow the rules

[Nymphadora Tonks]

Ok, now say it with me... MARY SUE!!! Ok, now that that's been dealt with, lets not see if we can fix this up a bit.

• I have never heard of this character in the books so I don't think it is a cannon character. And when I checked the character lists from the books, she wasn't there. So ya....
  
  
• Your personality is way to short. It needs to be at least two paragraphs or around 20 sentences. Same with your history.
  
  
• You cannot be related to both the Weasley's and the Malfoy's! Not only do they hate each other in the books, but it states clearly in the rules that there is to be no original characters related to cannon characters.
  
  
• You need to add to your weaknesses. They just can't be she misses her family. We were thinking more along the lines of a personality trait that hiders her personal skills. Or perhaps, she has a weakness in one of the subjects or something. I don;t know, be creative.
  
  
• Your appearance needs to be around a paragraph long, or a picture of the actress that you want to use for her.
  
  
• Not only is your post example in the wrong tense, it is way to short. Your post example should be around 10-12 sentences.
  
  
• You didn't put your name at the bottom of the application in the spot provided to say you agree with the rules and such not of the board.
  

In it's current state, there is no possible way that I can accept this application. Fix it up though, and I would be more than willing to look through it again. If you're not sure what a proper application should look like, take a look at the model application or one of the other ones that have already been accepted.