Ashley Shapiro

[15071991]

Name: (First and Last) Ashley Shapiro

Cannon Character: No

Age and Birthday: 14 7/15/1983

Blood line: Pure

Sex:f

Year: 4

House: Temeraus

Standing: (Either Death eater, Death Eater supporter, Order member, Order supporter or Neutral) Death Eater supporter

Pet: snowy owl

Broom: Firebolt

Personality: (At least two paragraphs) Ashley Shapiro is very cunning and sly. She can be fairly mischievous, but knows how to disguise it in a classroom setting. Ashley can be very organized and she is not a procrastinator. When it comes to making friends, Ashley is very easy to get to know, but she prefers to be alone. When pressured, she seems to achieve a higher grade.
Ashley Shapiro usually acts up to get some attention, but no one seems to understand that. Under all of her tricks and scams, she has a soft side that practically no one sees. Ashley knows when to be good and to pay attention, especially during classes. She becomes friends with practically everyone she meets, which can mean that some of her friends are people like Draco Malfoy.

History: Ashley is now a young German teen who grew up in a small town with her mother, aunts, and cousins. Because she has some family in the teaching business, Ashley has learned much before even going to a school. She has learned what happens to kids that act up in a class which has taught her how to be have when it comes to being in a classroom. She also learned to not use her abilities to play a trick on someone or to get back at them.
When Ashley was eight, she found out that she was a telepath. It was her birthday and she wanted to open a certain present first, but her mother insisted on a different one, so she fumed while opening the one given to her. She suddenly saw the present she wanted levitate over to her while she was still unwrapping the one given to her. SHe later thought about what had happened and found out her interesting power. Ashley soon found out how to control her new found power. Having so many cousins, Ashley and her cousins were each set to different schools, which led to her moving in to a friends home in France so that she could attend Beauxbatons Academy.

Strengths: potions, arithmancy

Weaknesses: keeping a civil tongue, divination, astronomy

Wand: willow and dragon heart-string

Appearance: red hair, tall, average


Post Example: Ashley walked into an empty room and sat down in a comfortable chair. She pulled out a roll of parchment, a quill, and some ink. She was writing her weekly letter to her mother. After about five minutes of writing, the room door opened and Ashley lifted her head. "Hello?" she said toward the open door to acknowledge that the room wasn't empty.


The Application Question:
1. My grandmother's house
(If you do not know what this is, maybe you should read the rules!)

I agree that I will follow the rules at Beauxbatons Academy. I will not disagree with what one of the staff members has told me to do. I will respect the other members of the site. I will post with detail and over 500 characters. I will not Godmode. If I do any of these things, I will accept what the staff decides.

By writing your Characters name here, you agree to all of the above.
I, Ashley Shapiro agree to all these terms, and will follow the rules.

[Jacey Fraser]

OK well firstly, you Personality and History are to short. They are supposed to be at least 2 paragraphs.

Also, it seems like your character is too perfect. I mean you have to keep in mind, she's only a 4th year. She's probably not going to know she's a metamorphmagus. Also with all her aunts.. I don't really see where that comes into the picture. YOu need to explain that a bit better or change it to something else.

Change that up and I'll look at this again.

[Nymphadora Tonks]

** Sorry Emma I know you're working on this one. But you're not on so I'm going to jump in here. **

I find that your history is rather confusing. It seems to me that you're missing blocks of it everywhere. We don't need you to right everything that has happened since the day that she was born, but it would be nice to see the main points, and maybe if you explained then a little bit better. Also you have a tendency to change tenses making it hard to read and understand.

I know this can be rather annoying, but sure you know what your character is like and stuff like that, but we don't. This is so that the other people get to know your character - as if she had been there forever, and isn't just appearing out of thin air.

Also your birth date would make your character 6 years old instead of 14. For her to be 14, the year should be 1983. One last thing that I can think to mention right now is that, everything you have written for your personality and history is all in one big paragraph - or so it looks like - which makes it hard to follow as people tend to get lost in it.

Fix it up, and I'll look at this again.

[Jacey Fraser]

Your history still needs work. If she is Germen, how come she is now in France, and when did she get there? And the admins and I talked about it and we aren't liking the metamorphmagus, so if you changed that, that would be great. Also, it is still to short. If you need help figuring out what it is we are looking for take a look at the model application.

[Jacey Fraser]

Looks better.

Approved.